Stillroom Book a well

How this was made.

One evening, one brief: a multi-page site for a booming field, with real motion, 3D, a story, and nothing that reads as AI-made. This page is the record: what was studied, what was decided, how it was scored, and what is still not good enough.

Process: Kasauti (research, feeling, mood boards, build, scored critique). Full docs in the repository: BRIEF, PLAN, RESEARCH, DECISIONS, COPY, BUILD-LOG, CRITIQUE.

Why this field

In-space manufacturing is one of the fastest-funded corners of space in 2026: Varda Space closed a $251M Series D in October, has flown six re-entries and plans a dozen more by 2028. Drug makers including Merck, Lilly and Bristol Myers Squibb have flown crystallization work.

It is also a field whose websites look alike: black pages, starfields, a rocket as the hero, a slogan in wide capitals. That made it a good test. The subject is physical and photographable, 3D belongs to it, and the default look is easy to name and avoid.

The feeling it had to carry came first: a scientist hands over years of work. They need to feel that the most delicate thing in the story, a crystal 40 µm wide, is in careful hands through the most violent part, eight minutes of re-entry. So the site is quiet almost everywhere and loud exactly once.

What a default build would have looked like

The AI default for this briefWhat Stillroom does instead
Black page, starfield, glowing blue Earth heroOpens on a salt lake at dawn; the background follows altitude and is night only in orbit; no stars anywhere
A rocket launch as the heroThe landing is the hero, scrolled into place; the launch is one far-away photograph
Purple, indigo or neon cyan accents with glowParachute orange, used for the parachute, the wells' temperature and the one button
Wide extended capitals (Orbitron, Space Grotesk)Supreme light at large sizes, Erode for reading, chosen from 16 families with the real headline
"Manufacturing the future of medicine in space""We grow drug crystals in orbit and land them here."
Three feature cards: Launch, Grow, ReturnThe flight told in order with its clock
Partner logos and testimonialsOne real published result with its citation; the concept stated in the footer, terms and form
Fade-up on every block, floating particlesMotion only from the flight: the landing, the drift, the burn, horizon-slit photos, the polarizer

What the best sites in the field do

Sixteen sites were captured at six scroll depths with a scroll video each. Three became the yardstick: Varda (same business, one colour world), Inversion (a re-entry company on a paper ground with real flame-test footage) and Impulse (a hero that holds still while the vehicle's own mission plays).

What the strong ones share: real hardware imagery, one accent on a restrained ground, one big statement per screen, plain specifications, and a pinned explainer for the one idea that needs teaching. What none of them have: a price, a timeline, or anything a scientist could plan with. That gap became the content plan.

Varda Space website at six scroll depths.
Ref A, Varda
Inversion Space website at six scroll depths.
Ref B, Inversion
Impulse Space website at six scroll depths.
Ref C, Impulse

Scores from two independent critics

Each of four rounds was scored by a new reviewer that had not built the site, from screenshots at 1440 and 390 next to the references. 5 is competent and forgettable, 7 survives "does this look AI-made?", 9 is award level.

DimensionRound 1Round 2Round 3Round 4VardaInversionImpulse
One idea6788567
Imagery5666678
Type566657 to 85
Layout and space55555 to 66 to 76
Motion meaning6777457
Motion feel5666568
Copy8888443
Usefulness88884 to 543
Mobile5677n/an/an/a
Slop7888567

The hero: a dot under the nav, then the parachute up close

Round 1 opened on the whole lake with the capsule a few pixels tall. Now it opens close on the parachute, clear of the headline, and pulls back to the lake as it lands.

Before: wide hero with a tiny parachute.
Before
After: parachute large beside the headline.
After

Re-entry: a glass sleeve, flying the wrong way, then fire

The first plasma was an orange shell around a capsule flying shield-up. Now the shield leads, a white-hot bow shock sits in front of it, the wake streams behind, and the two temperatures that matter are the headline.

Before: translucent orange cone around the capsule.
Before
After: shield-first capsule with large temperature readout.
After

The climb: a dead grey band, then the sky

Scrubbing straight from salt to night passed through neutral grey. Now the background climbs through the real colours of the sky above a launch: dawn, high blue, black.

Before: grey band under the launch photo.
Before
After: deep blue sky colour under the launch photo.
After

The proof: a number next to a capsule, then a number with its evidence

"39 µm" now carries the size distribution behind it, the capsule steps back while you read, and the flight clock is an instrument strip instead of 9-pixel grey type.

Before: 39 µm next to the 3D capsule.
Before
After: 39 µm with a size distribution chart.
After

The exploded capsule: floating labels, then labelled parts

Labels now start at a point on the part they name, the cassette slides out toward you, and the heat shield tips to show the face that burns.

Before: exploded capsule with loose labels.
Before
After: exploded capsule with leader lines.
After

The 37 rules, checked against the build

RuleStatus
Fonts (10, 36): no Inter, Geist, Space Grotesk, IBM Plex, Instrument SerifClean. Supreme and Erode, self-hosted
Pure white and black (3)Clean. Salt #e8e7e2, night #0c111c; microscope fields #050506
Gradients (1)Three linear gradients, all legibility scrims behind type on photographs, invisible as gradients
Rainbow (4)One deliberate exception: interference colour in the micrographs and the polarizer. It is real physics and stays inside the images
Glass, shadows, orbs, dot grids, left stripes (8, 5, 22, 23, 11)Clean
Card rows, bento, three tiers (6, 13, 17)Clean. One price; figures set as staggered type, not cards
Eyebrows, numbered sections, row dividers (31, 32, 33)Clean. Tables use a zebra tint, lists use space
Numbered step lists (37)Borderline, kept: the Partners timeline uses real day offsets (T−90 to T+21) on a sideways track, not 01/02/03
Em dashes and "not X but Y" (9, 15)Clean, grepped
Cheesy copy (34)One line rewritten after round 1 ("Fifteen times a day over everywhere")
Fake testimonials (12)None. The company is a concept and says so; every scientific claim is cited
Hover scale, sliding arrows (28, 25)Clean. Links underline in parachute orange
Privacy and terms (26, 27)Both pages present

Still not good enough

Round 4 came to about 6.9 against 5.2 (Varda), 6.0 (Inversion) and 6.4 (Impulse). Seven of ten lines reached 7 or more. Imagery, type and motion feel held at 6 and layout at 5. A last pass after round 4 rebuilt the recovery sequence, raised every label to 15 px with solid colours and fixed the clock, but it was not re-scored.

The 3D capsule is a careful model built from its profile, but it is still a real-time model next to photographs. Every critic named it. A pre-rendered, photographically lit sequence would close the gap.

All photographs come from one image model and share its habits. A real programme would have one photographer and one grade.

Tested at emulated widths in a headless browser, not on a phone. The WebGL sections need a check on a mid-range Android.

Images are about 1672 px wide, which is soft as a full-bleed hero on a large retina screen.